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		<title>Comment on Sovereign Lights: Keane&#8217;s Strangeland by oshptest</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 23 May 2012 16:58:31 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Wonderful review! Thank you!!  I don&#039;t know why they are always panned by critics no matter what they do.  Album sales speak for themselves.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Wonderful review! Thank you!!  I don&#8217;t know why they are always panned by critics no matter what they do.  Album sales speak for themselves.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Shadow Seasons: An Epilogue, 2011 by Sovereign Lights: Keane&#8217;s Strangeland &#171; Writing Privacy</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Sovereign Lights: Keane&#8217;s Strangeland &#171; Writing Privacy]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 13 May 2012 17:43:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[[...] But traditional Keane is never left behind. The closing track, &#8216;My Shadow&#8217;, is possibly the most striking single opportunity since the band’s early 2004 successes. Mature, with gripping rock dynamics, it befits the closure of an EP that’s defined by looking backwards – a band sighting the end of its own detour. I couldn&#8217;t resist using this to look backwards myself. [...]]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] But traditional Keane is never left behind. The closing track, &#8216;My Shadow&#8217;, is possibly the most striking single opportunity since the band’s early 2004 successes. Mature, with gripping rock dynamics, it befits the closure of an EP that’s defined by looking backwards – a band sighting the end of its own detour. I couldn&#8217;t resist using this to look backwards myself. [...]</p>
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		<title>Comment on Facing a Challenge by KaM</title>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 29 Apr 2012 18:21:33 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[As ever, I appreciate the sensitivity behind your words. You only wrote &#039;knocking&#039; three times. And this weekend, my threshold was crossed. :) People have said that I live my life in shadow, and that&#039;s all too accurate. Perhaps I really do rely on my Suns coming up again and again. But your metaphor does hold. I still have the memories of adhering to the wrong knocks and being poisoned. I certainly don&#039;t emerge as M.S. (though I do own a fez). x]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>As ever, I appreciate the sensitivity behind your words. You only wrote &#8216;knocking&#8217; three times. And this weekend, my threshold was crossed. <img src='http://s0.wp.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' />  People have said that I live my life in shadow, and that&#8217;s all too accurate. Perhaps I really do rely on my Suns coming up again and again. But your metaphor does hold. I still have the memories of adhering to the wrong knocks and being poisoned. I certainly don&#8217;t emerge as M.S. (though I do own a fez). x</p>
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		<title>Comment on Karma Chameleon: A Defence of Nigel Smith’s Biography of Andrew Marvell by KaM</title>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 29 Apr 2012 18:02:03 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[And thanks to you, sir, for your incredibly gracious reply. I very much enjoyed the way you set up your review, and perhaps I should have added to mine how your piece inspired me to write at all. I really don’t know where I got ‘salacious’ from; provocative better suits, and it was an appealing quality to your piece. [I amend the prose accordingly]. Had your review merely dismissed the biography, I don’t think I would been driven to provide a polar opposite. So thank you, indeed, for a springboard, and for your time in response. 

Absolutely, I agree with you that the writing and production comes within the reviewer’s remit. To redress, three years ago, I remember seizing upon a miserly two typographical errors in a monograph merely to find a blot on the landscape that might validate an otherwise sparkling review.

The impression I received from your review was that the consequences of the lapses of technique that you found were particularly severe, which I didn’t believe to be the case. Having read your response, I’m naturally much more comfortable (and in agreement) with your sentiment. And when I next read &lt;em&gt;The Chameleon&lt;/em&gt; through again, I’m going to be acutely aware of repetition, and perhaps it will suddenly strike me where it didn’t before.

Many thanks for your input, which has made this fascinating exercise all the more worthwhile.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>And thanks to you, sir, for your incredibly gracious reply. I very much enjoyed the way you set up your review, and perhaps I should have added to mine how your piece inspired me to write at all. I really don’t know where I got ‘salacious’ from; provocative better suits, and it was an appealing quality to your piece. [I amend the prose accordingly]. Had your review merely dismissed the biography, I don’t think I would been driven to provide a polar opposite. So thank you, indeed, for a springboard, and for your time in response. </p>
<p>Absolutely, I agree with you that the writing and production comes within the reviewer’s remit. To redress, three years ago, I remember seizing upon a miserly two typographical errors in a monograph merely to find a blot on the landscape that might validate an otherwise sparkling review.</p>
<p>The impression I received from your review was that the consequences of the lapses of technique that you found were particularly severe, which I didn’t believe to be the case. Having read your response, I’m naturally much more comfortable (and in agreement) with your sentiment. And when I next read <em>The Chameleon</em> through again, I’m going to be acutely aware of repetition, and perhaps it will suddenly strike me where it didn’t before.</p>
<p>Many thanks for your input, which has made this fascinating exercise all the more worthwhile.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Karma Chameleon: A Defence of Nigel Smith’s Biography of Andrew Marvell by KaM</title>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 29 Apr 2012 17:28:56 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Thanks, Dr. Mark! I definitely appreciate the alternative view. I support modern critical interests and tangents that break free from the fixed categories that have rarely seemed to encompass Marvell satisfactorily. (Perhaps I could say more about where I thought this worked and failed in the &lt;em&gt;Cambridge Companion&lt;/em&gt; on your own post). 

I wonder if my excitement with modern Marvellian criticism stems from the monographs of old becoming far too comfortable in making assumptions: that Marvell never married, for example, or that the poems to Villiers and on Tom May aren’t Marvell’s because they compromise a more comfortable political consistency. I don&#039;t think that problem was unique to Marvellians, though. How Harold Love can say the Horatian Ode was meant to reach Cromwell&#039;s hands is beyond me. Realising that too little is black and white with Marvell has pushed us to subjective and esoteric directions for illumination. And this, ironically enough, is likely to divide more.

What I would say, though, is that encapsulating Marvell as a whole across a theme - while I enjoy its creativity - does risk neglecting what is so special about him. I miss the work of John Creaser in the &lt;em&gt;Cambridge Companion&lt;/em&gt;, for example. My favourite critical works remain Rosalie Colie’s &lt;em&gt;My Ecchoing Song&lt;/em&gt; and Warren Chernaik’s &lt;em&gt;The Poet’s Time&lt;/em&gt;, so maybe there’s slight hope for me yet.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks, Dr. Mark! I definitely appreciate the alternative view. I support modern critical interests and tangents that break free from the fixed categories that have rarely seemed to encompass Marvell satisfactorily. (Perhaps I could say more about where I thought this worked and failed in the <em>Cambridge Companion</em> on your own post). </p>
<p>I wonder if my excitement with modern Marvellian criticism stems from the monographs of old becoming far too comfortable in making assumptions: that Marvell never married, for example, or that the poems to Villiers and on Tom May aren’t Marvell’s because they compromise a more comfortable political consistency. I don&#8217;t think that problem was unique to Marvellians, though. How Harold Love can say the Horatian Ode was meant to reach Cromwell&#8217;s hands is beyond me. Realising that too little is black and white with Marvell has pushed us to subjective and esoteric directions for illumination. And this, ironically enough, is likely to divide more.</p>
<p>What I would say, though, is that encapsulating Marvell as a whole across a theme &#8211; while I enjoy its creativity &#8211; does risk neglecting what is so special about him. I miss the work of John Creaser in the <em>Cambridge Companion</em>, for example. My favourite critical works remain Rosalie Colie’s <em>My Ecchoing Song</em> and Warren Chernaik’s <em>The Poet’s Time</em>, so maybe there’s slight hope for me yet.</p>
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